Friday 13 March 2015

Colouer

Tuesday 10TH March
COLOUR GOLD

  1. gold is the sound of a gold speeding car zooming past
  2. gold is the taste of a crispy apple pie
  3. gold is the feel of a giraffe when I  swoop my hand down it back
  4.  gold is the color of a jellyfish stinging people
  5. gold is the smell of crayons slowly getting melted
by Mackenzie and summer



2 comments:

  1. Hi Summer.
    I really like your post on your poem the color gold .
    I found it really interesting and you described it really well .

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  2. Hey Sum cool poem and a really the colour too Gold Oh and the best bit was when you said the smell of crayons melting that was awesome!!!!!!!!
    from Yana :) Good work

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