would compete in the olympics and what we had to do was find out 5 rules . My sport was pole vault. I was very interned into it when I saw it on tv. Here Is my work
Kia ora Summer. I really like how you put all of the rules in your own words. Maybe next time you could show how they train for a competition. Would you like one day to compete in pole vault? E noho rā
Kia Ora Summer I really like your post because it is laid out well. The thing I think you could improve on is explain a bit more of why you had to do it and how you made it. If you did make it in to the Olympics for Pole Volt what place do you think you would make? Holly
Kia ora Summer. I enjoyed reading about the rules about pole volt. Something you could add would be explain a bit more about your post. Why do you like pole vault ? Do you think Eliza McCartney would have made more people want to do pole vault ?
Kia ora Summer. I really like how you put all of the rules in your own words. Maybe next time you could show how they train for a competition.
ReplyDeleteWould you like one day to compete in pole vault? E noho rā
Kia Ora Summer
ReplyDeleteI really like your post because it is laid out well. The thing I think you could improve on is explain a bit more of why you had to do it and how you made it. If you did make it in to the Olympics for Pole Volt what place do you think you would make? Holly
Kia ora Summer.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about the rules about pole volt.
Something you could add would be explain a bit more about your post.
Why do you like pole vault ?
Do you think Eliza McCartney would have made more people want to do pole vault ?
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