i see him hide in the .the bush breathes out cold air, he gets colder ever minter it breathes the cold air .he hear i the seek yell read or not here i come. his heart beat beats fast as he hears the seeker come closer shivering with colds nis .the seeker runs to find more. he dash as fast as he can and got a worm blank he went back to his hiding spot he comes out his legs are so sore he get up and see the star watching him it's gloom night
HI Summer Oliver here I really like your writing that you did but maybe you should work on your capital letters and full spots but I did like that you used heaps of describing words in your writing
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