WALT: add detail to my writing
One very cold day I walk home from school its very long to walk home.I can hear the birds sing it is very nice I can see the snowflake dropping on my tongue it tastes like a ice pop with no flavour it is very weird
I felt lots of snowflake dropping on my skin it gave me a cold shiver it was that cold but I had 5 layers on my dog spike came looking for me I heard him barking came spike came I turned around and saw Ella standing there with her dog poppy “came here” said summer we went to my place and then took Ella home the end
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