Friday 25 November 2016

Writing Reflection T4W7

This week for writing we had to pick out of 2 pieces of writing to do. I picked to persuade santa that I should be on the good list, it was really hard but it is finished . Here it is  

4 comments:

  1. Hello summer. I like your blog post and your writing. I also like your set up for your drawing. Bye From callum :)

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  2. Hi it's Amy from paroa school
    this is really cool and next time Mack it less fuzzy
    can you cheek out my blog it Amy @ Paroa School

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  3. kia Ora ?`Summer I really like the reason you chose And I think you do all of things very well and I think you have been very honest with your writing as well. Noho iho rā.

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  4. Hey Sums.
    I really like your writing piece and I think it is clever that you thought to do this type of writing. I think your drawing has a lot of detail and you displayed it really well. What was your favoutite part about making this piece of writing and how long did it take you to write this piece?

    From Mya.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.