charter card

Planet 3 Pop out

my plan

setting -  plant three pop out

characters - summer kenzie    red green yellow black

problem - we run out of fuel

solution - i get some fuel

walt 1: use link in our writing 2-3 and  paragraph

walt  2:  use full stops capitals talk markes

“Oh no! kenzie we have run fuel in 3 2 1 ”said summer. “wonder what plant we land on”said summer  “the three plant to sun”said kenzie Oh no its the jumping plant that mean in 10 hours they turn into flowers and the flowers turn  into fuel.

as soon as we got the flower they just die that we must of pick the wrong flower  kenzie oh no now we have to wait 10 more hours!!!!!!

this is very annoying.

finally 10 hour are up  got the right fuel been there for ages gave red green black yellow a present

the End

Dear Diary

Dear Diary
I miss my friends and family
I do not like sleeping. The mud drops on my face.
lots of men are dieing. Its  very sad because we buried all of the men and woman. I am not having  fun. We thought that there would be sand  every  where  but there just bumpy rocks and very, very steep hills and there are bombs going off everywhere. 
 I feel sad for all the men that have babies and they are not home.